OOTP Baseball talk:Screens and Menus/Player Development Lab - Revision history

Ktulu: /* A lot of repeated words */

2025-01-16T01:35:40Z

A lot of repeated words

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	In the lists there are a lot of repeated words and I think it would help if they were kept to a minimum. For example, in "This program is considered EASY - On successful or outstanding completion this program will improve", really the only word that really depends on the item is "easy" (maybe "successful" and "outstanding" do too?). I'm not sure what the best way to present it on wiki would be, but I'd maybe introduce the list with either headings or a note that says what comes first is the program name, then its difficulty and lastly its result. The fewer words there are, the faster the reader can read and process the info.		In the lists there are a lot of repeated words and I think it would help if they were kept to a minimum. For example, in "This program is considered EASY - On successful or outstanding completion this program will improve", really the only word that really depends on the item is "easy" (maybe "successful" and "outstanding" do too?). I'm not sure what the best way to present it on wiki would be, but I'd maybe introduce the list with either headings or a note that says what comes first is the program name, then its difficulty and lastly its result. The fewer words there are, the faster the reader can read and process the info.

			Ktulu - I took the liberty of converting this into a table format.. This should allow for easier editing when inevitable changes and additions are made. It's not perfect, but it's a lot easier to read.

Kq76: /* A lot of repeated words */ new section

2024-12-11T10:37:37Z

A lot of repeated words: new section

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	The second part of "This gives you more say in the development of your players, something that has never been seen before in OOTP." isn't actually correct, unless I'm misunderstanding the meaning, in which case maybe it should be clarified. I don't remember what version it was, maybe OOTP4, 5, or 6, but we did once have the ability to tell the game what we wanted the players to focus on for a chance at improving it. The feature was, however, removed from the game not long after. And I don't remember exactly why it was, but my guess is people complained about something about it.		The second part of "This gives you more say in the development of your players, something that has never been seen before in OOTP." isn't actually correct, unless I'm misunderstanding the meaning, in which case maybe it should be clarified. I don't remember what version it was, maybe OOTP4, 5, or 6, but we did once have the ability to tell the game what we wanted the players to focus on for a chance at improving it. The feature was, however, removed from the game not long after. And I don't remember exactly why it was, but my guess is people complained about something about it.

			== A lot of repeated words ==

			In the lists there are a lot of repeated words and I think it would help if they were kept to a minimum. For example, in "This program is considered EASY - On successful or outstanding completion this program will improve", really the only word that really depends on the item is "easy" (maybe "successful" and "outstanding" do too?). I'm not sure what the best way to present it on wiki would be, but I'd maybe introduce the list with either headings or a note that says what comes first is the program name, then its difficulty and lastly its result. The fewer words there are, the faster the reader can read and process the info.

Kq76: /* "never been seen before" */ new section

2024-12-11T10:25:11Z

"never been seen before": new section

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	Twins_34 - Thanks! you were correct in what I was writing and I am not sure why I typed what I did. However, it is now corrected!		Twins_34 - Thanks! you were correct in what I was writing and I am not sure why I typed what I did. However, it is now corrected!

			== "never been seen before" ==

			The second part of "This gives you more say in the development of your players, something that has never been seen before in OOTP." isn't actually correct, unless I'm misunderstanding the meaning, in which case maybe it should be clarified. I don't remember what version it was, maybe OOTP4, 5, or 6, but we did once have the ability to tell the game what we wanted the players to focus on for a chance at improving it. The feature was, however, removed from the game not long after. And I don't remember exactly why it was, but my guess is people complained about something about it.

Twins 34 at 23:19, 7 November 2024

2024-11-07T23:19:21Z

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	In the section for the "Improve Pitch Arsenal" program I think there is a contradiction between the given requirements that the program be shown. Towards the beginning it states that the "program will not be shown if all the pitchers pitches are 375 or over" and then towards the end it states "Once a pitch exceeds 375 current this program will be removed from your Development Lab Program List." I suspect it ought to say "Once all pitches exceed 375..."		In the section for the "Improve Pitch Arsenal" program I think there is a contradiction between the given requirements that the program be shown. Towards the beginning it states that the "program will not be shown if all the pitchers pitches are 375 or over" and then towards the end it states "Once a pitch exceeds 375 current this program will be removed from your Development Lab Program List." I suspect it ought to say "Once all pitches exceed 375..."

			Twins_34 - Thanks! you were correct in what I was writing and I am not sure why I typed what I did. However, it is now corrected!

Kkfootball: Created page with "In the section for the "Improve Pitch Arsenal" program I think there is a contradiction between the given requirements that the program be shown. Towards the beginning it states that the "program will not be shown if all the pitchers pitches are 375 or over" and then towards the end it states "Once a pitch exceeds 375 current this program will be removed from your Development Lab Program List." I suspect it ought to say "Once all pitches exceed 375...""

2024-11-07T14:58:12Z

Created page with "In the section for the "Improve Pitch Arsenal" program I think there is a contradiction between the given requirements that the program be shown. Towards the beginning it states that the "program will not be shown if all the pitchers pitches are 375 or over" and then towards the end it states "Once a pitch exceeds 375 current this program will be removed from your Development Lab Program List." I suspect it ought to say "Once all pitches exceed 375...""

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In the section for the "Improve Pitch Arsenal" program I think there is a contradiction between the given requirements that the program be shown. Towards the beginning it states that the "program will not be shown if all the pitchers pitches are 375 or over" and then towards the end it states "Once a pitch exceeds 375 current this program will be removed from your Development Lab Program List." I suspect it ought to say "Once all pitches exceed 375..."